Local governments are pushing companies to move from large cities to regional locations.
What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Experts related to economic, social development, and policy-makers have debated about the increasing number of business allocated in regional or rural areas. This tendency leads to authorities take several actions against entrepreneurs. This essay I will discuss two main advantages and some disadvantages to demonstrate point and prove arguments
On the one hand, there is ample evidence in favour of moving and running business operations in remote areas where the population is highly seeking for job opportunities. Entrepreneurs and local population gain some advantages from this trend. The creation of employment benefits the local resident, while the cost-effective is well balanced and controlled by organizations. For example, recent empirical research by University Queensland suggested business located in regional areas have increased their profitability by 20% in 2019. Therefore, it is conclusive clear that this phenomenon will greatly generate positive development to both sides in terms of economy and social.
On the other hand, although it is evident that business and local community obtain some positive economic aspects, governments attempt to avoid this tendency by imposing harsh restrictions and hefty penalties. The downside of this tendency is mainly two, the rising of unemployment rate in metropolitan cities and the lost in tax annual revenue. For example, an article published by BBC News showed 30% of Australia capital income has decreased due to foreign companies started operating in remote areas. Conclusively, it is possible to state beyond doubt local authorities seek to protect their annual budget and may result in pose tough restrictions and penalties.
To conclude from the examples and arguments given I firmly believe corporations balance appropriately their cost-effective while employment rate arises in regional areas, however, the downside of this movement could significantly impact on the economic and employment development in large cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to demonstrate point and prove arguments On the one hand, there is ample evidence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79591836735 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14949089334 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6873909768 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162882800629 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554180331267 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033260497346 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918152131764 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332017790115 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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