When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We have been the witness of urban upgration during this current era. construction sector is transforming entire civilization in to a different direction where every single facilities will be within a walking distance. So that any one can avail it during emergency. This essay will elaborate the positive points in first section and in second part you are able to get to know what is the disadvantages after such urbanization.
Coming to the this section, as per my stand points, urbanization helps society to grow in another beautiful direction which not only provides us a modern lifestyle but also assures one to bring balance to daily schedule. Mostly, this category of society is raising up near the Information Technology sectors which is reducing the gap between office and home place. For example, in kolkata, Sapoorji Paloonji raised up few years back with numerous facilities such as public & children park, swimming pool, various sports ares & shopping centre. With all facilies where people would love to stay there in order to balance their life with tight work schedule. In short, to spend free time with ourselves or family members such developments are required nowadays for maintain a healthy lifestyle.
In other hand, in order to make our life easy and comfortable we are loosing space for cultivation which is effecting entire farming system. As fertile land ares decresing, our entire civilization may lack of having naturally growing crops & vegetables. In short, while planning to transform our life to other paths we must keep in mind the entier farming system.
In conclusion, modernization is crucial for our lifestyle but to some extend it can be harmful when we cannot save fertile land for crops and grains.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Construction
...rban upgration during this current era. construction sector is transforming entire civilizat...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ties will be within a walking distance. So that any one can avail it during emergency. ...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...l be within a walking distance. So that any one can avail it during emergency. This ess...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...s after such urbanization. Coming to the this section, as per my stand points, urbani...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...s crucial for our lifestyle but to some extend it can be harmful when we cannot save f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1554770318 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7366903027 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664310954064 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1480182545 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125104914731 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376551669449 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430509778783 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638870968797 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363205316395 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.