write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like Write Who your family consist ofWhat kind of presents each member would likeHow you feel about your friend coming to visit

Dear Jay,

I'm so glad that you're coming to India next month, as it seems ages since we last saw each other. Well, In my family - "my parents and younger brother" really excited to meet you as I always talk a lot about you with them.

You're such a warmhearted man in my life and thank you for asking what my family likes as gifts from you. Believe me Jay, there's no requirement of presents because your presence between us is the biggest gift than material things. So, please don't bother yourself by this.

Why don't you drop me a line and tell me exactly what is the date of visit to India as I'm always ready to pick up you from an airport. So that I can make plans for various activities that we would enjoy together.

I can't wait to see you then.

With love
Parabjot

Votes
Average: 5.6 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Jay, Im so glad that youre coming to India next...
^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Jay, Im so glad that youre coming to India next month, as it seems...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
...ways talk a lot about you with them. Youre such a warmhearted man in my life and t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...ikes as gifts from you. Believe me Jay, theres no requirement of presents because your...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t gift than material things. So, please dont bother yourself by this. Why dont yo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...se dont bother yourself by this. Why dont you drop me a line and tell me exactly ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y what is the date of visit to India as Im always ready to pick up you from an air...
^^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ties that we would enjoy together. I cant wait to see you then. With love Par...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36486486486 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19630295681 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72972972973 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2768863123 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7777777778 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283189806491 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916350593627 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735777663434 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154501351996 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533181983178 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Jay, Im so glad that youre coming to India next...
^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Jay, Im so glad that youre coming to India next month, as it seems...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
...ways talk a lot about you with them. Youre such a warmhearted man in my life and t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...ikes as gifts from you. Believe me Jay, theres no requirement of presents because your...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t gift than material things. So, please dont bother yourself by this. Why dont yo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...se dont bother yourself by this. Why dont you drop me a line and tell me exactly ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y what is the date of visit to India as Im always ready to pick up you from an air...
^^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ties that we would enjoy together. I cant wait to see you then. With love Par...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36486486486 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19630295681 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72972972973 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2768863123 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7777777778 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283189806491 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916350593627 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735777663434 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154501351996 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533181983178 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.