The Growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you Agree or Disagree?
In modern times, more and more people have begun to shop online leading to a believe that this foreseeable growth would someday result in the close down of retail outlets and stores in cities. Although, these factors are commendable and could lead to the reduction of the presence of physical stores, there would always be people who prefer to have first-hand interaction with products before making an informed purchase.
On one hand, individuals who are more technologically savvy prefer to purchase things online and as the trend continues many stores would begin to adapt to this change providing customers with online product illustrations and even reviews which in turn reduces the inventory costs of the sales provider and introduces this seller to a wider audience. In addition, the ease of purchasing items online and even getting discounts because of competition with other retailers would reduce the need to visit physical stores.
On the other hand, there will always be customers who prefer to actually touch and interact with products in stores, the emotional and cultural impact of this activity cannot be understated. Therefore, even as technology improves physical stores would always exist in some form or fashion. Furthermore, some specific products like Cars, Houses and Jewelry and Luxury goods requires the existence of sales shops to exhibit and illustrate actual products for customers to make informed purchase decisions.
In conclusion, although the existence and growth of online shopping on websites would actually impact the presence of stores negatively, not all shopping outlets would go extinct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: belief
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...ores would begin to adapt to this change providing customers with online product ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40392156863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68299499253 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1843313206 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.25 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148854403996 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704227887717 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717979009817 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109503600972 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659496054043 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.