Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is better to read books on an electronic device than it is to read traditional books on paper?”
humans are intelligent and curious animals who always try to gain knowledge about many things through alot of medium.The main source is books.books contain many topics like stories, theories, findings, and many more.In my preference i think reading books from electric devices is a new innovative way for people who are interested in reading.
First of all, nowadays people are mainly exposed to electric devics as it is a need of this generation.Technology has made humans gain many heights.electric devices are the new books as it can save many books in one device due to which a user can only carry a device at one moment rather than carrying a surplus amount of big and heavy books.electric devices also contain internet where user can surf internet where they can download e-books from many sites and read them anytime they want.The user must not trouble about losing books and tearing of pages like in traditional books do.
Secondly, ebooks are environmentally friendly as we know they donot need hardcopy made up by cutting trees in any way.As we know the earth is facing a life threathening problem global warming due to which many ecosystems are getting effected.The solution to it is afforestation and changing to ebooks form traditional books is a way to slow down the problem and save the environment.
Thirdly, e-books are more cost friendly than traditional books.E-books don't need hard copies which are expensive to manufacture.many people who are short in budget are not able to buy does expensive books. e-books have many free books and the cut in hardcopies make many books far more cost friendly than those traditional books so the people who have a low budget and students who get low allowance are able surf to internet and buy a cheap e-book.
In the end, though traditional books are the main stream but the technology has made many things easy for us.Using e-books over traditional books are the best way to go with time and be futuristic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95481927711 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89271281235 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.1344086022 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.954313257 48.9658058833 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 274.166666667 100.406767564 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.3333333333 20.6045352989 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.45110844103 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268176605391 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150618525931 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598509498837 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154711021063 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645911239403 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 11.7677419355 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 58.1214874552 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.1575268817 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.0537634409 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.