You are experiencing a financial problem and want to ask your landlord if you can pay the rent late Write a letter to your landlord In your letter explain Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When willful pay the rent

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You are experiencing a financial problem and want to ask your landlord if you can pay the rent late. Write a letter to your landlord .
In your letter explain:
Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When willful pay the rent

Dear Mr. Emil,
I’m writing you this letter to inform you that I’m having financial problems, and I’m afraid that I won’t be able to pay the rent on time.
I had a motor car accident last Friday on the Ring road. It was a big accident which included five cars. My car interior mechanical spare parts were damaged completely and I had no other choice other than to spend the money to fix the major collision effects. I survived having a fracture in my left leg and I stayed at the hospital for 3 days, which costed me to pay for the hospital bill. I wasn’t having my best days.
I would deeply appreciate if you could give me some time till my salary payday on the 25th of May to pay you the rent. Please accept my sincere apology for delaying the rent payment this month.

Warms wishes,
Fetouh Shahab

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al bill. I wasn’t having my best days. I would deeply appreciate if you could gi...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... delaying the rent payment this month. Warms wishes, Fetouh Shahab
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40131578947 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18618133978 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7090299073 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215451618198 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739850848286 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116577373842 0.0603063233224 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200752544078 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143012345462 0.0580467560999 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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