You are experiencing a financial problem and want to ask your landlord if you can pay the rent late Write a letter to your landlord In your letter explain Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When willful pay the rent

Essay topics:

You are experiencing a financial problem and want to ask your landlord if you can pay the rent late. Write a letter to your landlord .
In your letter explain:
Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When willful pay the rent

Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing with lot of regret to enquire about the possibility of delaying the rent, as, I am facing too many financial problems.
Due to the fact that I had an accident in the middle of the month and my car was extremely damaged, so, I was forced to look for another way to go to my work; Although, public transportations was available, yet, I was always late and I realized that I had to buy a new car for 1500 dollars. Therefore, I am excusing for a delay.
Consequently, I would really appreciate if you allow me to pay the rent along with the next month’s one, I would like also to inform you that I started to work for an extra shift, thus, I am expecting a raise in my salary that shall be enough to pay the 2 months.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Ahmed Kabis.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om you. Yours Sincerely Ahmed Kabis.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26582278481 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61005168771 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.604788108 44.8134815571 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 4.34317383033 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172112127404 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817383075716 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646210674501 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993390368031 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651506869688 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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