Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.
Every individual will have different likes and dislikes regarding their life. Most of the people prefer to lead a routine life without any change whereas some others think to have change in their day to day life. In this argument I would like to discuss both scenarios and give my opinion in the following passage.
On one hand, many people love to live their daily life like the way they scheduled. Indeed, they don't like variations in the days they spend. Generally, these people enjoy their comfort in having a same routine life. Consequently, this kind of people cannot accept any change in their life and also can't accept any new challenges. As they are addicted to a routine life their mind set won't allow them to get adjusted to a new place or environment. Indeed, they get irritated if their routine gets changed. For example, if the timings of their meeting in office get changed, they cannot accept it even it is a minor one.
On the other hand, there individuals who love to have adventurous life. Accordingly, they get bored of living in the same daily pattern. However, this kind of people like to meet new persons in their life and also wish to change their job regularly to make their life little challenging. For example, going to new workplace will have a chance to work on a new technology and gain new friends. Furthermore, people like to do different adventures so they will be able to fight with the difficulties in their life.
After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that individuals should have change in their life so that they can accept different challenges in their future and be ready to face any difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ke the way they scheduled. Indeed, they dont like variations in the days they spend....
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ccept any change in their life and also cant accept any new challenges. As they are ...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...adventurous life. Accordingly, they get bored of living in the same daily pattern. Howev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76949152542 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54856646707 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515254237288 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7733866065 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191622461387 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737379693094 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554538050201 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136112086675 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541043170618 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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