It is a disputable issue whether media coverage of celebrities is harming children. Important though celebrity reports may be a bad case, learns about celebrities also could provide live textbooks to self-examination. All things considered, I do not fully agree with this opinion.
Admittedly, Children's nature makes them imitate others' behaviors and that in fact may lead them to be misled, which is would a negative effect on their growth. Concretely speaking, they are too young to distinguish right from wrong. The core of the problem is the weakness of judgment.
To begin with, the development of judgment requires experience as a basis. To some extent, the hand-on coverage from celebrities is the most vivid case. Parents with long-term vision will not keep their children in the greenhouse forever. On the contrary, they are good at educating children with real cases, which including negative cases of necessity. For example, my cousin Jennifer once was a big fan of Justin Bieber, who is a singer known for his wild behavior. Under his influence, Jennifer tends to rebellion at first, but a few months later, the local media reported that he was arrested for drug addiction, she feels hearts broken and ask her parents for help. Her father told her: Maybe Bieber has the talent for music, but having noble cultivation and self-control is the key to success, so Jennifer recognizes her mistakes and tries to think in a more ration way.
In addition，familiar with celebrity’s story are beneficial to independence. We should know that it would have taken a paragon of virtue not to fall into temptation. The object of media is to reveal the truth, whereas there do have some dark parts. If children could realize that the world is complex and sophisticated, individuals will always encounter numerous temptations. They will not be too naive and stand behind their parents all the time. By keeping in touch with the truth, they are more likely to deal with various things in the real world.
In a nutshell, despite exposure to some negative reports is a kind of risk to children, the positive parts are more dominant. By doing so, not only would it help them distinguish right from wrong but also conducive to independence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, whereas, for example, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 965.302439024 209% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 403.0 196.424390244 205% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01488833747 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8821999546 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 106.607317073 229% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605459057072 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 283.868780488 215% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0401876016 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.05 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.15 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.23603664747 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241713629371 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711234921245 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605306325632 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121958362968 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599416504177 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 40.7170731707 260% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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