The earth is being filled with waste material such as plastic bags and other rubbish. Is this really happening? What are some solutions to this problem?
Nowadays the environmental problems bother people, especially ecologists worry about plastic wastes, which are created every day. In my point of view, this problem is real and people try to find solutions for this issue.
The problem of garbage catastrophe does exist, because some rubbish decomposes during for many years. Plastic bags bottles plates and other things decay over 400 years. Most of these things are used one times then people throw it out and they don’t think about pollution. Although, the existence of abundance plastic materials disturb people there are more dangerous wastes such as glass. The glass decomposes more than 1000 years. As a result, wastes begin to collect on our planet. Every year the number of junk yard increases. For example, according to researching of MSU ecologists, the number of landfill has increased in 20 times during 5 years.
The main problem of such pollution, that the waste products hurt environment. As a rule, things which was created due to chemical way emit harmful substances in the soil, water and air. Also, such emission have a negative impact on flora and fauna. Unless, animals are very watchful in food, most of them can die due to chemical vapors, hurting themselves by any rubbish, such as a dolphin swallowing 80 plastic bags. And of course, people harm themselves by breathing polluted air. So, this problem are solved by people who create harmful plastic things. They can replace dangerous materials with the more ecological products and create special factory which recycles rubbish.
In conclusion, I can say that rubbish is a one of global problems on our planet. This is true problem, which demand solution. So, to solve this issues people have to make more ecological things instead of plastic and create the recycling factory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10135135135 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50678407503 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3796345097 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268991742734 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759953616762 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630989706845 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166111351963 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213496686861 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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