Dear John,
I am so glad to hear that your already make a decision to New Zealand, I understand the first time is exciting as well as a advanture so let give you some advises.
I would say you'd better come to here in autumn because all the tasty fruits is ready so if you come we could go to orchard pick the friuits that we like. Besides, the autumn yellow leaves will make sunning views in the season because you will see a wide range of color on the mountains.
I suggest you go to South Island to stay in Queentown for a week, you do not have to plan just walk along the lake, the peaceful is the best natural experiences that you could remember for a long time.
We have a guest room in Auckland so after your South Island trip, you can come and stay here. You cannot image that how I excited about our reunion.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d the first time is exciting as well as a advanture so let give you some advises....
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'advise'
Suggestion: advise
...ell as a advanture so let give you some advises. I would say youd better come to her...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...t give you some advises. I would say youd better come to here in autumn because a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23312883436 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10525117318 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5414245754 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135265224911 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540338290177 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046831822199 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834709758579 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149240840829 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.