It is widely held belief that cities are good place for children to grow up while there is strong counter argument amongst section of people that countryside is wise choice. However, i am of the opinion thay this is a matter has to be debated in light of several factors before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.
First and foremost is that there are wide opportunities available to people living in cities. Such as they can have easy assess to educational facilities, Professional, businesses, IT Sectors, and many more. People from sub rural areas often approach cities for their educations as cities have enormous universities and colleges offering myraid of courses which are not available in rural colleges.
Second reason is that, there are better employment services available in cities. People have to live in cities taking into consideration their future prospectives. Masses get better pay scales and other services in cities. Moreover., the cities provides the better standard of living as well as the lifestyles. People are becoming more socialised and they spent their precious time with family having some leisure activities such as visiting malls, watching movies which are available in cities.
On the contrary, there are certain groups of people who vehemently contend that countryside is the better place to grow up. The atmosphere and environment of suburbs are better than that in cities and there is no pollution which can have detrimental impact on our health. Besides this, The Government Authorities are giving subsidies to people who started living in countryside as there is approximately 10% discount on house taxes which will ultimately lead to save our incomes.
After analysing both the views, I am of the opinion that cities are better place to grew up as compared to countryside because of easy accessibility and availability of many things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... before a reasonable conclusion is drawn First and foremost reason is that the le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92287917738 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77256478189 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542416452442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.856970841 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202885355906 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665348039466 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612728976473 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105297289439 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526947892338 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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