Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Universities and colleges are the places where studnets develop themselves physically, socially and mentally. These arethe places where most of the students spend most of their daily time.Personally, I believe that it is extremely important for the universities and colleges to include sports and social activities and recieve financial support.I feel this way for the two reasons which i wil explore in the following essay.
First of all, sports and social activities keep the students physically and mentally fit: they are filled with a sense of energetic after performing these activities. Students who get bored after continuous lecture for a long perid of time, can make their mood fresh even from a sport for a short period of time. My personal experience is a compelling example for this. Just about a month ago, while I was continuing my last semester of graduate program, our professor entered in our classroom. He was looking a bit serious at that time. Immediately afer entering inside our class, he told that our universiy was going to be renovated as it was getting very old and some of the classrooms had become even risky to study. He continued by telling that the university managemnt committee had come into the conlusion that all the courses of last semester students should be finished with in two weeks and unless that is done, the student would be graduated a half year late. At first, we were so shocked to hear that. But later on, we realized that the university's decision was in favour for us. So, we agreed in that When we started our class the day after that, we had to study for 9 hours continuosly and we all were getting so exhausted. We reached in a state where we couldnot grab anythng that the teacher taught us so, we were allowed to have a break for two hours and we decided to play some sports to freshen ourselves. That feeling after the sports was so amazing that we had never realized we could get that.As a result, when we started the next class, it was as if we were starting the very first class of the day. As you can see, students get more active and energetic, if they are given the chance to be involved in sports.
Secondly, universities and colleges that receive equal financial suppor as they do for classes and libraries, can improve their standar d of sports and social activities: this may lead to the discovery of potential players which will in turn increase the fame of not only the universities and colleges where they study but also that of the nation. In contrast, when studnets donot receive skilled trainings or facilities for sports, their talent may not be exposed and that will remain inside them forever. For instance, when I was in ninth standard, I had a very close friend, Jack Tony. We were bound with each other by our friendship, our love and care for each other. He always wished to become a good basketball player. But, our school had no basketball court. Later on, fortunaltely, our school bought a land nearby t its building and constructed a basketball court over ther plus it also hired a silled basketball coach. My friend used to play everyday and did a industriuos work that time. He was in the eye of our basketball coach. His hard work and dedication led him to be selected for inter-district basketball tournament and from then on, he improved himself to more ahead and now he is the famous basketball player all over the country. As you can see, hidden talents of the students can be exposed and used to make their life successful if they are given iwth proper sports facilities.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that universities and colleges should recieve equal financial support for sports and social activities as they areequally important as classes and libraries are. This is because they help students to become more active, and because they help to provide a new path to studnets future
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personally
...students spend most of their daily time.Personally, I believe that it is extremely importa...
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Suggestion: explores
...his way for the two reasons which i wil explore in the following essay. First of all, ...
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Suggestion: period
...ood fresh even from a sport for a short period of time. My personal experience is a compelling...
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Suggestion: some
...enovated as it was getting very old and some of the classrooms had become even risky to stu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nless that is done, the student would be graduated a half year late. At first, we...
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...iversities and colleges where they study but also that of the nation. In contrast...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...asketball coach. My friend used to play everyday and did a industriuos work that time. H...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...My friend used to play everyday and did a industriuos work that time. He was in t...
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Line 6, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and libraries are. This is because they help students to become more active, and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help students to become more active, and because they help to provide a new path ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 30.0 11.0286738351 272% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 95.0 43.0788530466 221% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3211.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 677.0 407.700716846 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74298375185 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10090420048 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63371817007 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 329.0 212.727598566 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485967503693 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 993.6 618.680645161 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 9.59856630824 302% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9240383314 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.678571429 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1785714286 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10714285714 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188128963418 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510763815001 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760660134129 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148047075281 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596987800847 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personally
...students spend most of their daily time.Personally, I believe that it is extremely importa...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ctivities and recieve financial support.I feel this way for the two reasons which...
^
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (wil) must be used with a third-person verb: 'explores'.
Suggestion: explores
...his way for the two reasons which i wil explore in the following essay. First of all, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ood fresh even from a sport for a short period of time. My personal experience is a compelling...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 666, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...enovated as it was getting very old and some of the classrooms had become even risky to stu...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 942, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nless that is done, the student would be graduated a half year late. At first, we...
^^
Line 2, column 1516, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...we had never realized we could get that.As a result, when we started the next clas...
^^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ities: this may lead to the discovery of potential players which will in turn inc...
^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iversities and colleges where they study but also that of the nation. In contrast...
^^
Line 5, column 954, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...asketball coach. My friend used to play everyday and did a industriuos work that time. H...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 971, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...My friend used to play everyday and did a industriuos work that time. He was in t...
^
Line 6, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and libraries are. This is because they help students to become more active, and...
^^
Line 6, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help students to become more active, and because they help to provide a new path ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 30.0 11.0286738351 272% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 95.0 43.0788530466 221% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3211.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 677.0 407.700716846 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74298375185 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10090420048 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63371817007 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 329.0 212.727598566 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485967503693 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 993.6 618.680645161 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 9.59856630824 302% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9240383314 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.678571429 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1785714286 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10714285714 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188128963418 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510763815001 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760660134129 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148047075281 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596987800847 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.