Imagination is an integral part of advancement in any profession and field, allowing people to broaden their horizons by transcending insurmountable boundaries of thoughts or possibilities. Since the majority of innovations in human history seem to be attributed to forerunner’s creativity and attitude to look beyond what’s established, it is valid to question whether imagination outweighs knowledge. However, as far as I am concerned, in most professions and academic fields, it is essential to be equipped with proper knowledge to understand tasks and further proceed accordingly.
Granted, in a few fields such as science and business where inventing new theories or products that should surpass existing ones are necessary, imagination plays a vital role. To specify, before the Wright Brothers, humans had not even considered the possibility that human could fly in the sky, hence there was hardly knowledge that could be applied to devise such a flying object to carry men. The two pioneers, who were different from their contemporaries, ultimately invented the first airplane through their creativity by incorporating engine, wings, and propellers. The freedom from mobility restriction is one of the biggest feats that prompted an unprecedented progress in history of transportation and globalization. This compelling example demonstrates that imagination is crucial in certain fields.
Nevertheless, it should be noted that understanding of existing structures and established facts are more important in most professions and academic fields. In the medical field, for example, what will happen if doctors put more emphasis on imagination and then attempt to experiment with their patients? Not only does it violate the principle of job ethics, but also people cannot use the medical service to cure their illnesses because they lose confidence of the doctors. During med-school, prospective doctors are trained for almost a decade to acquire existing knowledge in biology, such as human organs, genes, viruses, and diseases. Based upon this solid knowledge base, they are qualified to perform surgery and provide medical service to the public. Therefore, when professions are intertwined with human interaction, knowledge is more conducive to make people’s lives convenient and fulfilled.
Not only at an individual level but at macro-scale, knowledge acts as a driving force to sustain our society and thrive. What if governors are instilled a sense of entrepreneurship and obsessed with new ideas and do not make decisions based on reality? Only pursuing radical ideas that are not supported by the vast majority of people is ostentatious word for dictatorship. Relying on slight chance of success of trying new path hampers people’s lives. Imagine a president declare space exploration project and pour extensive budget to push forward the development while most citizens are impoverished. On the other hand, if educators always emphasize imaginative skills and neglect the importance of basic knowledge that are essential for understanding important concepts and facts such as of mathematics and language, students end up acquiring nothing but illusion that will only confuse how to communicate with people and how to comprehend the complex society. By passing down basic but quintessential knowledge young people have to be born with, education has played a key role in human’s thriving.
In summary, even though imagination brings lively new experiences to humans, knowledge should be served first in the majority of professions. The worldwide pioneers are those who have a deep understanding of existing theories, ideas and structures, and proceed further to explore different paths based on this knowledge set.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 654, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'unprecedented progress'.
Suggestion: unprecedented progress
... one of the biggest feats that prompted an unprecedented progress in history of transportation and global...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3183.0 2235.4752809 142% => OK
No of words: 568.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60387323944 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15905663712 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 324.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 992.7 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5039843499 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.391304348 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6956521739 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82608695652 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181630149988 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508004129301 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479804585086 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101717344049 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433132808799 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 179.0 100.480337079 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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