The bar chart shows the subjects studied by different research students in 2005
The bar chart gives information about 6 subjects(linguistics,psychology,natural sciences,engineering,programming,mathematics) studied by research students in 2005.
Overall,the number of male research students studying different subjects are higher than that of female research students.
Both male and female students are mostly interested in natural sciences while in men the least interested in mathematics
compared to linguistics in women.In addition to natural sciences the males students are also interested in mathematics and psychology.
In terms of mathematics,boys are 200 on this as opposed to below 50 for girls.In males both programming and engineering subjects are equally studied (exactly 150) which was highly recorded when compared with opposite gender (around 75 and 85 respectively).In psychology full strength of males opted to this subject that is 200 where females strength was around 175.
On the other hand,linguistics are mostly studied by females where Above 100 students are studied by them, which was slightly more than the males who are between 50 and 100.In comparison both categories accounted for same population for natural sciences
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97619047619 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.88414529713 2.65546596893 184% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5296354595 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.8 112.824112599 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268562859682 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179358987574 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133540243234 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156096426795 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132471193693 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 61.2550243902 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.0 11.4140731707 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.