Write a letter a restaurant manager to organise a party.
Why you want to give party
What special arrangement you will need
Any relevant questions
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter regarding a function to be organised on 12th June at 6 to 9 o’clock in the evening.
The reason why I would hosting the party is my daughter’s birthday. On this day she turned one year so this day is very important for us, hence
We decided to celebrate the day of her born.
I would like to book your restaurant’s banquet hall.There will be around hundred guests attending this party and the dinner. Could you arrange some cartoon characters for the decoration? In the food menu, Indian and Chinese dishes need to be included, which required to be only vegetarian. I would also want a corner for DJ and dance floor.
I will be free to discuss the menu detail And the cost of entire arrangements over the weekend.Kindly let me know a suitable time to visit your restaurant on the weekend, so that we can discuss all these details
I am sincerely looking for your response very shortly.
Your faithfully,
Nidhi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'host'
Suggestion: host
... the evening. The reason why I would hosting the party is my daughter’s birthday. On...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this day is very important for us, hence We decided to celebrate the day of her b...
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Line 8, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... to book your restaurant’s banquet hall.There will be around hundred guests attendin...
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Line 10, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the cost of entire arrangements over the weekend.Kindly let me know a suita...
^^
Line 10, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kindly
...ire arrangements over the weekend.Kindly let me know a suitable time to visit yo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84117647059 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06391544509 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6519364707 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159691562163 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623244330091 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475437338075 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609619325593 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524381577962 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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