You are living in a university residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of notice from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the university. In your letter,
Complain about the situation
Say why this is a problem
And propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Mr smith,
I am I am writing this letter regarding the noise which is coming from the new canteen. It has just knew open at university residence. Although I am happy that we have this facility, the restaurants remains open up to midnight, and as a result there is talking, shouting and sound of motorbikes continues remaining until about 12:30 each night.
This causes me and my neighbours in the residence serious problem, Because at that time we are either during the to sleep, or in some case trying to study in our bedrooms. In both cases, the noise disturb us, making us tried in the morning or affecting the progress or our studies. I am sure you will appreciate that this is very worrying situation for us.
I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the canteen’s opening to 11 pm at the latest on weekdays, leaving it at midnight during the weekend.
Thank you for your attention to this important matter.
Kind regards,
Nidhi Doriwala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'I am'.
Suggestion: I am
Dear Mr smith, I am I am writing this letter regarding the noise...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: KNEW_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
...oming from the new canteen. It has just knew open at university residence. Although ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at that time we are either during the to sleep, or in some case trying to study i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81764705882 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60904070984 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.8482039752 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215568895586 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775582414544 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509101016917 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112972573706 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533452010173 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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