Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be board members of the society others however believe that schools are the best place to learn this discuss both views
Some frogs believe that parents need to educate their offspring in what way the great part of the community. Other one despite that schools are better area to study.
In my opinion,both the parents and the teachers have an in the sea pebble role in shaping the character of the children.
Firstly, parents are the primary teachers in whom is the first school by the personality development of the children is initiated. From birth to preschool Children are under the sole custody of their parebts.They initiate the action of their parents and for that this reason it is important for parents to become a good role model for their children. Parents are best people to teach them the concept of good and bad. When they are taught to make decision from young age they are unlikely to go when they grow up.
In other way parents are not the only sufficient to teach children. Teachers at the school have an equally important to build their character. The school is basically at a miniature of the universe. In the school children get to meet with other children or a different character personality and family background. This revelation that they get at a school place important role in the formation of their parents. It is the duty of parents to instil in them the values of discipline and social commitment.
To conclude that parents and teachers both are important to build children character. In my opinion, there roles are equally important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...are better area to study. In my opinion,both the parents and the teachers have an in...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...under the sole custody of their parebts.They initiate the action of their parents an...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...teach them the concept of good and bad. When they are taught to make decision from y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81927710843 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.620370368 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469879518072 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9706670138 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281963888858 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985170989522 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564169011816 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149403602832 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488065689582 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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