Depending on gas and oil i a must for most of first world nations since the time its was discovered. this shifting to use other sources as aiming to found a new ones that is eco-friendly to limit their expence would offset the drawbacks entailed by statment.
One commonly cited disadvantage that some countries whom relay on gas and oil might economcly suffer. country like Saudi Arabia may face a crisis over this act because they depend on this industry by 80%.
Despite this, there are a number of significant benefits to having a new sources in remote and emprace them. first of all, adopting a new sources will charge the government with extra money . this helps to invest in other effective projects. building science research centers or investing on social centers are great example of how to put that money to use.furthermore,using other sources is eco-friendly. enviroment can not take that toxic waste that come along oil and gas, not to mention its danger to creatures.
Also,using clean sources like sun light fr instance make a significant effect into the enviroment. the air will be cleaner, less noticeably chemicals will be released and almost zero pollution will be produced.
To sum up, although there are some drawbacks to adapting new sources despite gas and oil, it is clear that the new sources can make a significant contributions to countries in remote by saving the government expense and minimize its environmental harm. on balance, i would argue that investing in the new sources is beneficial to any country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03488372093 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87879720597 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8386093483 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181973448113 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064403024784 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476387918607 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984916645639 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05457617731 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.