Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undenied that online shopping has gained popularity toward all people, those buying anything such as books, air tickets and groceries. While I accept that there are some drawbacks of buying on the Internet, I believe that it still have its benefits.
On the one hands, buying things on the internet means that people will have to cope with risks such as fake and poor quality products receive or wrong goods. Indeed, these wares overspread on many different selling websites and people only choose them through images. Therefore, they do not know how quality of them. In addtion, unlike buying at the store, people could be delivered incorrect goods because the amount of people those ordering is a lot and uncontrolled.
However, I would argue that these positive aspects is outweighed by the weaknesses. Convienence and better price are the biggest advantages, they are plus points which help online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Web-based stores are usually opend all time, this mean people can make purchases when they have desire and spare time. This is helpful to busy people, who have no time to visit stores. Furthermore, most online stores is offer lower price, as well as having various bargains that help save even more money. The best way to pay less is compare to price of different online stores, online shopping make prices comparison quicker and simpler.
In conclusion, there are minus points to buy things on the Internet. However, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...oods. Indeed, these wares overspread on many different selling websites and people only choose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99609375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42761102487 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2813241237 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274965768437 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834926258674 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665129222105 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1599707543 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492896313512 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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