"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
In this argument of auther of national aeronautics magazine has discussed about manned space flight and unmanned space probes and satellites.here many drawbacks into the unmanned and manned both but there is some advantages and success rate depends on the specific flight.
Today the camera quality and science is progessed to much from what we can send a satelite and probes without a men.There is to much of satelite are working nowadays. It can easily detected according to many diffrent positioning system and sensors.The cost of this can be high but there is no loss of any human life
We can send men into the flight but there is risk of losing his/her.the most suitable example for it is the kalpna chawla.the whole mission was completed successfully and while they are returning with many of the positive results and research the flight was burnt and we have loosed them.By this drawback we can not take risk with any high knowleged person.
In another case without man we can not work with some technical issues in onging mission but the results and researches should be stored and there is only loss of money if it can not complete successfully.the best example for it is recent mission of india chandrayan-2.At once there is lost of communication but by using satellites and according to past position.it is again get little success to contect with it but if there is any humon available than it can more effectively connected.
From this one can conclude that both are the riskey and costly method.But according to today's technology we can do some work by operating from the earth without any Manned requirement into space flight or unmanned satellites or probes.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1378 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.752 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.631 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 48.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.055 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.516 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.906 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.283 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some advantages'?
Suggestion: there are some advantages
...s into the unmanned and manned both but there is some advantages and success rate depends on the specifi...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...camera quality and science is progessed to much from what we can send a satelite a...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
... can send a satelite and probes without a men.There is to much of satelite are workin...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...an send a satelite and probes without a men.There is to much of satelite are workin...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...end a satelite and probes without a men.There is to much of satelite are working nowa...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...elite and probes without a men.There is to much of satelite are working nowadays. ...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'detect'
Suggestion: detect
...ite are working nowadays. It can easily detected according to many diffrent positioning ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...diffrent positioning system and sensors.The cost of this can be high but there is n...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h but there is no loss of any human life We can send men into the flight but ther...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...light was burnt and we have loosed them.By this drawback we can not take risk with...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...is recent mission of india chandrayan-2.At once there is lost of communication but...
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Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
... according to past position.it is again get little success to contect with it but i...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...t both are the riskey and costly method.But according to todays technology we can d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 2260.96107784 62% => OK
No of words: 284.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94366197183 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76318501557 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.8473053892 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.968197801 57.8364921388 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.8 119.503703932 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.8 23.324526521 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302466697634 0.218282227539 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164900195788 0.0743258471296 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407538438717 0.0701772020484 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169379712522 0.128457276422 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319340970201 0.0628817314937 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 14.3799401198 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 48.3550499002 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.197005988 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.32208582834 129% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.1389221557 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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