In this modern era, advancement in mobile phone have made humans lives more easy. This essay will discuss the pros like easy communication and availability of information, also cons as in health issues, wastage of time and so on. All of this will be discuss elaborately in looming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are plethora of pros of phones, one of the main point is communication to others is easy now. Because, there are various of application available on internet which helps to communicate with there loved ones. Therefore, families and friends can share their stories and problems on the phone. For example, there are many applications available which also have a facility to do video calling in abroad also like WhatsApp, Skype, Hike and so on. Moreover, mobile phone can also provide various of information on technology and basic problems. Therefore, people are use phone as a method of getting information.
On the contrary, there are some cons of mobile phones also. Firstly, it causes some serious damage to a person eyesight. Because, nowadays people use their phones in very large amount of time, in which their eyes get suffer through a blue light caused by phones. As a result, weak eyesight is now major menace in youngsters.A study conducted in India depicts that, 56% of people are suffering from eye problems caused by mobile phones. Additional, people now are spending lot of time on there mobile phones, deu to that lot of there precious time get wasted. Hence, people are not available focus on their work properly.
To conclude, there are lots of disadvantages of phones, but as seen number of way it helps to improve human life the cons are easily neglected.
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- Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves Discuss both views and give your opinion 48
- Some people feel that young people face more pressure today than the equivalent age groups did in previous generations Others think they have a much easier life than their parents did What is your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any rel
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 73
- It is better for young to get an advice from old people than young people Do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
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Suggestion: A
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96842105263 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6645513309 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1382026187 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14572371893 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530113830392 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639425175421 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081537433725 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162367481314 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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