You want to improve your knowledge of a foreign language which can help you at work. Write a letter to a foreign language teacher. In your letter, you should tell:
– Where did you hear about the teacher?
– Why do you want to learn a foreign language?
– Ask some questions about the course.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter with regards to enquire about the short term English language course.
I came to know about you from one of my friends, Miguel, he was your student 1 years back and took English classes for 3 months. He insisted me to take classes for you as he had a wonderful learning experience at your acadmey.
I am a Business Analyst by profession, which requires me to have strong verbal and written communication skills as I need to prepare business documents and give presentations. Additionally, most of our clients are from English speaking countries, and to avoid any kind of miscommunication it is vital for me to master this language.
Before I join the class, I would like to have answers for a few queries. How much time do you think I will need to be a fluent English speaker and how much will you charge for the lessons? Also, will I be taught to read and write English in addition to speaking it?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Mukesh Kumar
- You want to improve your knowledge of a foreign language which can help you at work Write a letter to a foreign language teacher In your letter you should tell Where did you hear about the teacher Why do you want to learn a foreign language Ask some quest 56
- Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter in regards...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter in regards to learn English from you. I come to k...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and took English classes for 6 months. He advised me to take classes for you as...
^^^^
Line 10, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the duration and timing of the course. As I am a working professional I need to k...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68484848485 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89326503328 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7453822806 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211036641908 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894736553842 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746091342078 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13338593812 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684642393352 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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