Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
This passage opens up a very intresting topic that women are not equally suited for many tasks becuase they are physically dissimilar to mens. Some people could agree with the author point of view but to be honest this claim is not agreeable at all, as the women are powerful as men evidenced by a mom giving birth to her child which is a painfull process, men cant imagine. The author point of view is not agreeable due to the following reasons discussed in the following pargraphs.
The first and foremost example is modern world sports, like cricket, football, hockey, gymnastic, volleyball, wrestling, weight lifting etc etc, these all games are supposed to be requiring great physical efforts and hardships. As author claims that due to physical variance, women are not suited for such tasks, so check the stats of any game, you will see number of women are performing very well in every games and they have the capability to even compete with the mens teams like we have come across many cricket matches in which men players played against the women players in which women players shows remarkable perfomance.
The second example where women are suitable for any task like men is the industries, like taking the example of a automobile industry, you will came across females in maintenance department, painting department, designing department, assembling department. Not even a single department in which there are only mens working bc women cant serve in this. We can take the example of food industry in which women are working effeciently with hands in hands with mens and working in a team.
Like we can search for any aspect of the modern world we can not find any task which is specific only for the mens as womens are not able to do this because of physical dissimilarity, you will not find a single department. Now a counter claim is possible that mens are not suitable for every work becuase of their physical dissability, like a man can give birth to a child, which is the most painfull process but the womens are capable to do that. As one can claim that women can not be a father, but in modern world women are both working as a father and mother too. One can find easily that a woman is performing as a single parent for their childrens by both working as a father by earning and taking care as a mother. By nature men is made superior to women, but that is not found true in todays world, as we can find numerous inventions and pride works done by women.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... child which is a painfull process, men cant imagine. The author point of view is no...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: etc
..., volleyball, wrestling, weight lifting etc etc, these all games are supposed to be req...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... industries, like taking the example of a automobile industry, you will came acro...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...mple of a automobile industry, you will came across females in maintenance departmen...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ch there are only mens working bc women cant serve in this. We can take the example ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63863636364 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46872064268 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459090909091 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.450800872 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8461538462 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306906810594 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11544173114 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818084315164 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186723974552 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351430099842 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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