Major countries nowday's face traffic problems. Describe the situation in your country and discuss possible ways to overcome it.
I've heard a person rightly say "Human desires have no boundaries." Traffic has been an issue that is prominent in most countries around the world. I have shared a few issues and solutions which could alter the current situation
for the better.
Humans especially in India have a desire towards tangible materials and are influenced by the society his/her lives in. Statistically, the number of private vehicles have increased manifolds in the recent years, which has certain outcomes. From an environmental point pollution increases leading to a rise in temperature and global warming. Traffic congestion is prominent in cities along with numerous damaged roads. For example, The interval between laying new roads
has been the same in India, whereas they are damaged sooner when compared to the past years, proving increased traffic flow on them.
To be considerate of the future we can inculcate a few changes which can also be cost-effective. Firstly, we can use public transport which is frequently available. Secondly, vehicles can be shared between people traveling to
the same location, saving fuel. Thirdly, Government's initiative towards this problem would be to increase the tax on vehicles so that people would shift towards public transport. For example, Singapore has successfully levied high vehicle tax which intern prompted the usage of public transport, thereby reducing traffic and pollution.
To conclude it is the role of people and the government to control traffic problems and to protect our environment as well. We need to wisely use vehicles such as carpooling and use of public transport for a better society. Changes
should be implemented before expecting others to follow it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89571842298 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5059530366 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707046538277 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022540630037 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291765271899 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330962616388 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304948198677 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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