Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing
serious social problems.
What are these problems and how could they be reduced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Movies are the pure form of entertainment. Without any age difference from a child to an elderly
person, each one of us would love watching movies. Movies are a full pack of emotions, Romance
and actions. Later on, the films stepped into social awareness with a lot of morals. From movies, even
the illiterate would see the world and learn many things. But the new era has started, where the
movies have traveled into social violence. Movies are screening a large poster of harmful activity
which is creating a great impact on today’s society. Films are not only showing the crime but also,
giving a clear escape root for the victims. Everybody would be afraid of punishment before
thinking of getting into any criminal activity. but nowadays this mindset is changed because of the
movies. Many people will agree with this view.
Several activities are taking part in the world. I would like to give my opinion on two main
views. The first major problem is Rape and murders. The last generation would have not heard the
word rape but this has become a daily issue which is happening all around. These changes
eradicated from the movies where the criminals get new awareness on how to clear the evidence or
any semen traces from the body of the victim. For example, in a movie, a girl would be raped and
murdered, but the reports cannot find the rapist because he would already fade out the semen
traces from the body of the girl with some external objects. Seeing this many culprits are doing
the same or similar activity. To reduce this type of offense is to frame punishments is better ways
like hanging the rapist and to stop the filming society from showing this kind of violence.
The second main problem is cybercrime. Cybercrime is nothing but stealing one's information. With
the little data leaking out, a person's entire life is ruined. Nowadays with one smartphone, all the
data like banking details and the private spaces which are captured and stored or uploaded is been
hacked. For example, in a movie, a person would be very rich. The hacker would get every detail of
the rich man. Next would follow up with every activity of the person through social media. The calls
and messages would be tapped. Then the hacker would start blackmailing the rich man with those
data asking him for ransoms. The rich man would do as he states to. At one point in time, he would
suicide because of the torture. The reports would state that it suicide because of some stress in the
business and will close the case. This type of movie would pave a way for cybercrime in real life. To
less this type of offense, is just to create awareness in minds of people from stopping them to save
or share information on any digital devices, and movies of this kind can be banned or to make the
content not to clear.
To conclude, movies should not be taken too seriously by viewers and the content on public offense
should not be so elaborate. When the movie does not explain the ways clearly, then crime would
not take place or been reduced. So it is best to avoid or shorten the activity. If people also just take
the positive side and ignores the negativity, it can bring drastic changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2676.0 1615.20841683 166% => OK
No of words: 566.0 315.596192385 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72791519435 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27774904093 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 176.041082164 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512367491166 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 834.3 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 16.0 2.52805611222 633% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7331958306 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3243243243 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2972972973 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.62162162162 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 34.0 4.38176352705 776% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127706394662 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314991033587 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303273929984 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337273016184 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250668362798 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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