Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems.
What are these problems and how could they be reduced?
Our contemporary world is now developing with a rapid speed in all aspects including entertainments such as films. Some movie manufactures tend to create violence scene on account of making fascinating movie. This trend leads to a gamut of dilemmas which can be resolved by individual, family and society.
This matter has wrought severe damage owing to the fact that some manufactures make violence movie so as to attract the viewer. The fighting movies are extremely imposingly, it has massive investment and huge turnover, thus it attracts viewer notoriously. Other reason is that people suppose violence film reflects the reality of community and they bias the movie like that.
The persistence of this complication has rendered immense consequences and foremost of which is society's vices. Watching a rich list of savagery films, the subconscious is affected without awareness. The quandary leads to rampant behavior that causes bad influenced in community. For instant, domestic violence or crime can be happened on account of easily stimulated.
While the problem is seemingly insurmountable the same is not left with no viable way out and primary of which is family’s dessuasion. All family should create the rules of watching time and movie genres. Moreover, government must regulate the violence level on each movie elaborately.
All things consider, this social evil was extreme detrimental to word due to the violent trend. However, by the combination of family and government, I believe that the dilemma could be puzzled out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39094650206 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93504220175 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.2730093366 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141527709411 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411895099652 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406597682705 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698422225827 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214701906558 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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