You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Deepak Sharma and currently, I am a commerce student at Holymount College. I am writing this letter with regard to your advertisement published in 10th March’s “Metro times” English newspaper. It was stated in the advertisement that you are looking for a cashier in the City Museum shop for the holidays and college students can also apply for this position. Thus, I would like to apply for the published job vacancy.
Let me elaborate, I have been studying business accounting for three years. Every year during the college holidays, I prefer to gain work experience rather than go out for the vacation. Last year, I worked for a local health care club and I handled their bookkeeping work. Moreover, I am quite familiar with web-based accounting software for example Tally, EzyBooks and ZohoAccount.
This job position for suitable the students and it is for three months only. Additionally, this vacancy matches with my experience and skills. Therefore, I would like to apply for this vacant position at your shop. I have enclosed my resume with this letter.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13989637306 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78500180731 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.68548839 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324611332667 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102748232807 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715880873006 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175128414498 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843449414162 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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