You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
- introduce yourself
- explain what experience and special skills you have
- explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter regards to a job vacancy you possess at the City Museum shop in Cambridge. I have read an advertisement you did in the local English newspaper. I am working as a CNC machinist at Cooke and Denison, due to the Covid pandemic, my company slows down work and we have got a month lay-off for this January 2021.
However, when I was studying at the university, I worked a part-time job at a local historical museum in Windsor. In those time span, I got many skills and acquired good knowledge about the preservation and maintenance of valuable and antique items with great care. Additionally, I was a punctual, polite, and good communicator with colleagues as well as visitors too.
The main reason for my interest in this job is I have free time over this coming holidays and you are also looking for someone who has enormous experience as well as knowledge, however, you mentioned that you are looking for a temporary employee which perfectly suits me with the position.
I eagerly wait for your positive reply and let me know if you need more information or a work experience letter from my employer.
Yours faithfully,
Amit Savaliya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you did in the local English newspaper. I am working as a CNC machinist at Cooke ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81951219512 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82915895499 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8298524905 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344724877689 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123209067882 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944410758093 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192577898021 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910878950842 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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