Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.
It is true that maintaining animals in zoos are not moral. Although some people think that zoos play an important role on entertainment and wildlife research, and I am going to discuss both sides of this argument.
On the one hand, zoos are one of the most constructive approach to protect a host of endangered animals due to the absence of hunters. When vulnerable species are kept in zoos, they will have food and safe area sufficiently. Another reason should be taken into account is that zoos stand a good chance of a resourceful learning environment because children can visit these places to study new knowledge and broaden their horizon about animals’ wildlife or habitat. All above else, they not merely are beneficially used for animals but also increase profits and improve people’s living standard for those working at zoos.
On the other hand, when it comes to zoos, many people think that these places are unethical because nobody can have any rights to keep animals in artificial environment like zoos. Particularly, the captions are wrong when people exploit them to earn profit by exhibition. Furthermore, animals fail to hunt since they are kept in some limited cages and depend on human on a daily basic. Therefore, their ability to survive tend to disappear, and the best reliable solution to save endangered species is by protecting them in their natural habitat. Only when preserving them in their natural environment, they are able to grow up throughout freedom.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against whether it is not right to reserve animals in zoos or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04832713755 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71098295081 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9067485076 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276720177465 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957350753298 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934912617946 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194341833595 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114915680892 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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