Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think
that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.
Discuss both views.
in this modern world, perspectives of how to keep animals are varied between
people. Some people think about caging them in zoos or forests while others think it
is illogical to limit animals’ movements. I am going to discuss these views according
to environmental, personal and economic perspectives.
Keeping some animals in zoos will protect them against predators, bad weather, and
food availability. Nevertheless, keeping animals free is more logical than isolating
them because if we keep animals caged, they would not be able to have fresh air and
chase other animals. Therefore, it is cruel keeping animals confined in small spaces.
It is advisable to put our efforts into keeping our creatures in their natural habitats,
in order to give them the opportunity to experience normal life.
Keeping animals is essential because some animals are in fact becoming extinct.
Although keeping these animals is costly, the profits made by keeping these animals
are substantial. Take Indian lions for example; a wide range of people travel to India
to see these animals in circuses in India. However, some people think that
governments should invest the money in improving the infrastructure of their
nations instead. Building new electrical power station, for instance, is more
important than spending thousands of pounds to preserve certain creatures from
extinction.
Lastly, keeping animals is important for study and research whereas others think we
have no right to use animals for entertainment and in labs.
To conclude, keeping animals in zoos might have many values but it is irrational to
keep these animals away from their natural habitat. The reasons are that besides
they are not vulnerable creatures, they have the right to survive independently
because of having feelings and emotions as human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in this modern world, perspectives of how ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45644599303 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76099372605 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588850174216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2896148906 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319012055751 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112758228429 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078492858891 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088408616428 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811332728974 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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