In the past many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence the world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is widely held belief that world would be a serene place if it was governed by women while others oppose it. However, I am of the opinion that it is a matter to be debated in light of several factors before a reasonable conclusion is reached.

The first and foremost reason is mildness in women’s nature. In other words, women generally are calm, caring, cautious, polite. Due to these qualities they can be considered as peace lovers and avoid violent activities. A good example of this is a recent survey conducted by an eminent sociologist Dr. Peter Smith revealed that approximately 70% of women not indulge in violent activites and they tend to solve each kind of situation with calmness.

The second worth mentioning reason here is their problem solving ability. Women have great sense of responsibilty and they are multitaskers, have capability to handle conflicts. They always think about a situation in broader and futuristic manner. Moreover, it is medically proved that women have excellent decion making power which, eventually leads to more understanding and appropriate conclusions.

On the contrary, there are certain groups of people who vehemently contend that men are better leaders as they have inborn dominating attitude which made them better communicator as well as dictator. They are more expressive than women.

After analyzing both the views, I am of the opinion that women can also become good leaders due to their marvellous qualities.

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Average: 6.5 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, kind of, as well as, in other words, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19246861925 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80184809723 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661087866109 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.733728788 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182222656946 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605440371561 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047889986575 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950917143396 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342719985258 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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