Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, TV programs and other leisure activities. How harmful could this be to children? What could be done to solve this problem? How to solve that problem?
The amount of violence in children’s free time activities, such as video games and Television programs, are increasing and majority of parents are not happy with it. This essay will describe how dangeours it is and perspective solution for it.
There are several factors that make children’s leisure act so harmful for them. One of them is it can make them seriously injured or can take their lives. In other words, children usually get accident by watching action movies or playing racing games through which they tend to copy their stunt without any safety to impress their friends . Generally, people harm themself by doing so. For example, from a report of USA, in 2019, local hospital has admitted sixty percent of children who have been injured after trying different stunts from the action movie and racing games.
Another factor that contribute that violence in children’s activity is so harmful is the crime ratio from young generation. Furthermore, children used to play in between to create drama scene which they had either seen in the crime movie or played on a game. The result of this, they tend to harm eachother to perform same story with real equipment or weapon which is ultimately converted into a real crime.
However, there are different actions which can control this high rising issue. Firstly, parent should restrict the Television programs by locking the channels or by contacting to the service provider. Moreover, they also can encourage their loved ones to play with logical games, such as based on mathematics game. In addition, the government should also banned on watching action film for under 18 year old child and illegal to sell speedy games to them.
In conclusion, as several free time activities for children include huge violence which can be harmful in terms of accident, death or commiting a crime, parents and the government can take several steps to lock down such activities by closing down such Television programs and not allowing to sell games under 18 years old people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hout any safety to impress their friends . Generally, people harm themself by doin...
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Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'ban'
Suggestion: ban
...In addition, the government should also banned on watching action film for under 18 ye...
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Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...ching action film for under 18 year old child and illegal to sell speedy games to the...
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Line 9, column 291, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'selling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: selling
...ch Television programs and not allowing to sell games under 18 years old people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06547619048 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50755359318 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8066530286 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187791446537 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629941020937 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426603877636 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112590806119 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464224214708 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.