people spent alot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before is it a positive or negative development

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people spent alot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before.
is it a positive or negative development?

since, the dawn of massive industrialization has burgeoned denizens with hefty flow of capital, they are turning out to be extravagant. though,the mankind is experiencing a lavish lifestyle today by acquainting desirable necessities, still this vogue is a downfall for the community as they are impeding in national development by escalating ecological issues.

undoubtedly, acquiring ample materialistic things is fundamental aspiration of human beings but the ravaging outcomes of this addiction cannot be overlooked as this habit of overspending gives birth to use and throw culture.inspite of owning clossal products at their homes, individuals thirst to buy the novle and updated goods due to the dynamic nature of market is proliferating day by day. seemingly, according to a recent report published by world health organisation , more than two-fifths of the worlds total scrap consists of technological trash. indeed the sole accountability for this nuisance is overspending at electronics by the users. sadly, this scenario slowly and steadily is contibuting to the issue of global warming.

on the top of that, the very root behind widening the void among destitutes and well-heeled souls is the heaps of money spend by eminent groups. consequently, this exercise of throwing money in huge numbers for personal luxurious due to handsome earnings is heating up the inflation rates briskly. and undenniably, poverty-strickens are thriving for daily and basic needs.also, it would be biased to bypass the statistics provided by indian economy that the consumption of money for unnecessary wills has turned the inflation counts into the double-digits.therefore,the poor are becoming more poorers with this development and undesirable practice.

to reframe, altough each and everyone anticipates for better living conditions and expend alot for personal contendment, still in my perception spending huge sums of money unwisely under heavy infatuations behold myraid problems with it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or the community as they are impeding in national development by escalating ecolo...
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...evelopment and undesirable practice. to reframe, altough each and everyone anti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69798657718 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48287255379 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674496644295 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5740330919 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.8 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136765715414 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046553535551 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313581869649 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741718115905 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344523663505 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 9.78957915832 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
since, the dawn of massive industrialization ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Though
...they are turning out to be extravagant. though,the mankind is experiencing a lavish li...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...re turning out to be extravagant. though,the mankind is experiencing a lavish lifest...
^^^^
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or the community as they are impeding in national development by escalating ecolo...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...ent by escalating ecological issues. undoubtedly, acquiring ample materialistic things i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Seemingly
... of market is proliferating day by day. seemingly, according to a recent report published...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t published by world health organisation , more than two-fifths of the worlds tota...
^^
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Indeed
... scrap consists of technological trash. indeed the sole accountability for this nuisan...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: indeed,
... scrap consists of technological trash. indeed the sole accountability for this nuisan...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sadly
...erspending at electronics by the users. sadly, this scenario slowly and steadily is c...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ting to the issue of global warming. on the top of that, the very root behind w...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...heaps of money spend by eminent groups. consequently, this exercise of throwing money in hug...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...heating up the inflation rates briskly. and undenniably, poverty-strickens are thri...
^^^
Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... counts into the double-digits.therefore,the poor are becoming more poorers with thi...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...evelopment and undesirable practice. to reframe, altough each and everyone anti...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69798657718 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48287255379 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674496644295 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5740330919 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.8 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136765715414 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046553535551 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313581869649 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741718115905 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344523663505 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 9.78957915832 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.