Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Should history stand in the way of progress?
Old structure of property is d best way in order to potray the past of a country. The art skill of ancient time, which made with the hands of people. I accord with the notion that the aged architecture should be preserved and mantaince should be provide in small intervals. However some proportion of masses opine that it downside is the cease of development of country. The following treatise will explicit the reasons behind the same that this building are of great advantage.
The first and foremost idea in saving the aged building is culture. If we do not save our heritage it would be difficult to elaborate next-gen about the difference between facts and fictions. moreover this building presents the art of people who carve stones and turn them into the beautiful structure. To exemplify this, it can be stated that people learn the value of the culture the world they live in. Many building are essential to save. Taj mahal is one of the beautiful example of this fact. this building is consider as symbol of love and also very famous not in the country in which it situated but in all over the world. The art work done over the wall is really mesmerize, moreover it include in the list of "wonder of world" and this is the proud of every person belong to the place.
Another compiling argument in this notion is that it also promote tourism which is beneficial for nay country. Reasonbeing it affect the rapid growth of economy and proved beneficial in order to provide employment to local people. To attribute this it can be stated that number of individual love to see heritage architecture and spend lot of money to get the essence of the art. For instance, Rajasthan in India is famous among people all around the globe due to the historical importance and their tradition skill of carving stone and handicrafts. this not only promote the local people income hence the value of local culture.
To recapitulate after contemplating it can be stated that these historical heritage are really important for a country not only from the cultural point of view but also for the economic growth and promotion of toruism which in return become befiicial not only for country but for the people of country too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: d the best
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Message: Did you mean 'provided'?
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...ld be preserved and mantaince should be provide in small intervals. However some propor...
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77260981912 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55793855082 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509043927649 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0855896259 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2105263158 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14415081924 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470532126958 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422203829067 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836801447433 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501976280962 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.