Increase in the price of the petrol is the best way to control the air pollution and traffic. To what extent you agree or disagree.
In the last few decades there is drastic increase in the number of vehicles on the road. Some thinker believe that increasing the price of gasoline is most effective way to curb the air pollution and traffic however, others have the opinion that some other measure should also be follow to solve this problem.
If the cost of the fossil fuel increased it will definite help in minimizing the traffic by lower down the vehicles number on the road hence, it will assist in curbing the air pollution but on the dark side if the fuel price increased it will have an impact on regular commodities and market price of the objects will increase as everything directly or inversely depends on the transportation and if price raised the transportation will also become costly leading to inflation in the country. Therefore, this solution is short term solution and have big drawback as this might lead to economic crisis instead of solving the root problem.
On the other hand, public transportation should be encouraged. Government should make the public transportation more approachable, affordable, comfortable and most overwhelmingly hygienic. People avoid using this transportation system as it is less spacious, uncomfortable and unhygienic additionally, less frequent. Secondly, government should plan awareness campaigns to aware people about the devastating impact of pollution on environment and human health. Thirdly, this is the most overwhelming measure which should be taken to improve the situation of raising pollution and traffic that is by educating children at colleges and schools. They should be given lectures an impact of pollution and also asked about the different solution to curb these problem making it more interesting and interactive session. This the most optimistic view.
To conclude, we can say increment in the cost of non-renewable resource is efficient way to sort the problem even though, other solutions such as education, public transport and awareness to public can act as better solution and long term strategy to sort these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...r of vehicles on the road. Some thinker believe that increasing the price of gasoline i...
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Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...ed about the different solution to curb these problem making it more interesting and interact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3009118541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95859460354 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.383027589 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14073158374 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438630444784 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570567179178 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935417945186 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628812998539 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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