You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement program. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this program has now been cancelled.
Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter:
• state your reason for writing
• describe the problem and your concerns
• explain what you would like the Principal to do.
My name is John and I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the news that the summer work placement program has been canceled.
I have selected Business English at your school in July and August because I thought it is the best opportunity to strive in the work placement program. There are many schools around the globe for Business English program but decided to join your college, however, there are a handful of colleges that enable students to go and work in local companies as a part of the curriculum such as in California, Toronto, Berlin etcetera.
The college fee of your college is lofty even though, I was doomed to study here as I thought it will equip me with knowledge and hands-on experience. Nonetheless, I have invested a lot in my course I am not getting the aspired course.
The course subjects are totally different from the one advertised. I would like to request a full refund of my fee I paid for my course. I will search for another school in California that provides Business English classes and also assure the work placement as part of the course.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
...join your college, however, there are a handful of colleges that enable students to go ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ork placement as part of the course. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Jot
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76585365854 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65019501376 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5793879259 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325999636173 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108271335213 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911425776733 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155687850365 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814774297349 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.