You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about:
– what course are you doing now
– why you are not satisfied with that course
– what course would you like to change to
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to request you to change my course of study in the college because I am not satisfied with the course.
My name is Jot and I am a student of the Post Graduate- Business Administration course. Currently, I am pursuing my first semester. I have done my graduation in Bachelor of Computer Application and hence, I was guided by my tutor to opt this course because it will furnish me with business skills which mean my computer skill will be compiled with my business education and open wide opportunities for me in the future.
However, after getting admitted to this course and attending some class I realized that, I am only interested in computer science, business subjects are not a cup of tea for me. I have no basic knowledge of business which has made it worse.
I want to change my course to the Post Graduate-Web designer course. As I told you that, I am graduated in a computer course it is a relevant course for me. Moreover, I am interested in coding instead of theory. I am very passionate about making websites.
I assume that you will accept my request and let me move the course I want. I look forward to the reply from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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- You are going to visit the UK for an English and Homestay program Write a letter to the host family introduce yourself ask the family some question to get essential information about the UK tell the family scheduled date of arrival and time 73
- Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information on the dates the program the accommodation and the cost 73
- Internet crime is increasing rapidly as more and more people are using the internet to make financial transactions What can be done to tackle this problem 77
- Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists To what extent do you agree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uest and let me move the course I want. I look forward to the reply from your end...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52752293578 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74784426298 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536697247706 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1748492106 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9230769231 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220812027455 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089450092116 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106033417136 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169448017642 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107898660342 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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