You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house.
Write a letter to your friend.In you letter,
1. Thank your friend for staying with them.
2. tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday.
3. explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter.
Hi Kavi,
Hope you are doing good since we met recently at your house in Pondicherry.
I really wanted to appreciate your warm hospitality at your house, gathered for get-together of school friends. You ensured that we were looked after very well in all aspects.
There were many cherished moments during this visit. Long walk in the seashore in the drizzling rains and hot coffee in our favourite Italian restaurant will be remembered whenever i think of Pondicherry. Silence of Aurobindo ashram and mind healing nature of Auroville has softened my mind and instilled more positivity in my outlook.
I always wanted you to recall these wonderful memories when you think of this get-together. For that, I am also sending the photos of it with this letter.
Hope you also enjoyed the time we had together. Keep in touch. We will plan similar moment at my place next time.
Take care,
Anand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... restaurant will be remembered whenever i think of Pondicherry. Silence of Aurobi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, still, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62182402515 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710526315789 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4866233053 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235485295373 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759544196139 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762209113941 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138896113561 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792309907124 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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