You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain -
why you are selling the television
describe the television
suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Browni ,
Hello! Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I'm feeling blissful while inscribing this epistle to inform you that luckily i'm being promoted to the position of Deputy manager by next month as scheduled. According to the transfer policy, I'm supposed to join my duty in Delhi and have to shift from here as soon as possible. Therefore, I'm selling my electronics appliance in order to purchase new ones over there.
Frankly speaking, i do remember vivdly that you have aspiration to buy a second hand television at reasonable price. As you are well aware with the fact that i bought this 56 inches HD screen two months ago and share a unique affection. This is becasue, it was gifted by my parents and i wanted to handover in resposible hands who would use it prudently. Moreover, graphic content is appreciatable due to the technical advancement.
It would be grate if you could pay a visit to my place to experience its ace qualities and this way you would get acquainted with the higly qualified features. Thus, you can come on upcoming weekends says 27th of march. Otherwise, you should suggest me alternative days as per your convenience.
Hope to hear from you soon and have a health weekend ahead.
Your lovingly,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Browni , Hello! Hope this letter finds you in...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...radiant health and best of the spirits. Im feeling blissful while inscribing this ...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...uled. According to the transfer policy, Im supposed to join my duty in Delhi and h...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...om here as soon as possible. Therefore, Im selling my electronics appliance in ord...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...w ones over there. Frankly speaking, i do remember vivdly that you have aspira...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s you are well aware with the fact that i bought this 56 inches HD screen two mon...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ecasue, it was gifted by my parents and i wanted to handover in resposible hands ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84234234234 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67996409771 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693693693694 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6865823625 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6923076923 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259719240639 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859130861193 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623232174238 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132770484621 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055495539778 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.