Sports like sky diving and skiing are dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People's opinions differ as to whether sky diving and skiing are terrifying game and should be prohibited or not. Though there is some robust altercation against I confide that these sort of sports need to be halted. However, I shall scrutinise the reason why I feel this in the subsequent essay.
First of all, there is some possible reason why people might argue that game like sky diving and skiing should not be banned as it offers excellent adventure to its followers. And it can not be denied that adventure abolishes peoples stress of their routine life. Owing to tho which, they become better concentrator on their job.
On the other hand, despite the above arguments, I believe that sky diving and skiing should be vetoed by emphasis. The first and foremost cause to support this opinion is, these sports do not give any kind of physical exercise as other outdoor sports does. The amount of amusement Football and Cricket offer, dive from sky or skii from mountain does not. Besides, there is no such prize money as other sports if you consider it as a profession. Take example the famous athletes. You hardly know someone who earned fame for these games whereas Tennis, Football and Cricket have a huge fan following all over the world.
Another reason to emphasis this view is, sky diving and skiing are so dangerous that it puts someone's life on risk. There is no such eye-catching safety ness observed. Study's has shown that majority number of people are died because of any sports, sky diving, and skiing hold the massive scale of it.
By the way of conclusion, presumably, sky diving and skiing may have few advantages, but it seems to me that the drawbacks are outweighed than its merits in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Peoples opinions differ as to whether sky diving and skiing are terrifying ga...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
Peoples opinions differ as to whether sky diving and skiing are terrifying game and shou...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g game and should be prohibited or not. Though there is some robust altercation agains...
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Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...bust altercation against I confide that these sort of sports need to be halted. However, I...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...n why people might argue that game like sky diving and skiing should not be banned as it o...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ite the above arguments, I believe that sky diving and skiing should be vetoed by emphasis...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...nother reason to emphasis this view is, sky diving and skiing are so dangerous that it put...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
... people are died because of any sports, sky diving, and skiing hold the massive scale of i...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
... By the way of conclusion, presumably, sky diving and skiing may have few advantages, but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, whereas, as to, i feel, kind of, sort of, by the way, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37941169199 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.302251892 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312754864387 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869856224222 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719994931033 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157587156674 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389571351944 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.