The number of people getting higher who wearing fashionable clothes. Is it good or bad situation?
These days masses are preferring to dress with the attires which are trendy and of latest fashion. People may have different opinion whether this is a positive or not negative trend; however I assert that it is more negative repercussions for both individual and society.
To begin with, trendy clothes are more popular among youth because they wants to keep themselves updated, but actually it is the cause of great distraction for them especially from their studies. Juveniles nowadays are trying to be like their famous celebrities and spend their spare time on shopping and following their clothing style, rather than using the free time on constructive activities which will be beneficial for their physical and mental development. Apart from this, many a time these fashionable clothes are not comfortable still people choose to wear them, just because they think it will make them look good.
Elucidating further, this trend of running after fashion has brought many negatives effects on whole society. Due to peer pressure, people try to copy one another and the person who is economically deprived suffered the most because they are not able to afford this fashionable clothes and ultimately they fail to get the acceptance of the society. This problem is more vital among youngsters during college or university education when they are not forced to wear uniform. This trend is rising the discrimination among the people of the country in the basis of their wealth. Despite the fact that social equality is essential for growth of any nation, people are still preferring to wear the expensive fashionable clothes if they can afford them and making the others to feel low.
In conclusion, unequivocally more and more people are opting to wear trendy outfits, but this trend is causing negatives effects on the personal growth of individuals and dividing the people of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'mass'.
Suggestion: mass
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ential for growth of any nation, people are still preferring to wear the expensive fashionable cloth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15210355987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6399199067 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8077029032 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.727272727 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200097268858 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791840244455 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566056075122 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115776402163 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489184630739 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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