Television has two roles: to inform and to entertain. Explain which of these roles you see as more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Recently, the effects of doing sports on the human's overall health has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the effects of sports on the human's lifetime?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is not highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the general perspective standpoint, sports fields are bound up inextricably with physical activity, which indicates they leads to both mental and physical health. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between weight loss and brain activity as well as an exponential increase in body fit. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contentions that the likelihood of sports club is correlated positively with not only sports match but also leisure time.
Within the realm of science, without the slightest doubt, doing sports attribute to medical treatment, it that it would come down to reducing heart disease, cancer risk and cholesterol level. A salient example of such attribution is modern society, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take more convenience for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint stressful life style problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to stress, depression, and even anxiety. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of doing sports on individual's health.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of doing sports are highly more significance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54081632653 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02428391709 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659863945578 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6226940492 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108589138749 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335760191111 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313026346783 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618621372871 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124781682642 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.