Some people choose to eat no meat or fish.
They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly a few portion of populace vocalize that eating meat or fish is advantageous for their health as well as whole world. The non-vegetarian diet endows high nutritional contents and control the invasive spurt in the population of animals, while I cogitate that vegetarian diet consists more nutrition than vegetarian.
Since the insane usage of chemicals in farming has trimmed the nutritional value, thus individuals have shifted to non vegetarian as it provides ample benefits to body. Seemingly, an escalated count in the consumption of non vegetarian is quite conductive in bringing the excessive number of animals under absolute control. To exemplify, as per the facts published by WHO in the gone calendar year which depicted that the ecology balance of marine life was under control owing to consumption of large number of sea creatures by the mankind. Despite of this, massive killing of speechless creatures just for nutrition is not bonafide gesture of human kind.
On the other hand, the food which primarily rely on vegetarian contents is highly nutritious and do not put the human beings in the peril of chronic epidemic. The vegetarian eatables are easy to digest and provide immense minerals which a body requires. Also it is biased to over look the annihilation of humans in China due to deadly epidemic 'The Corona virus' which has emerged owing to the eating of reptiles. Therefore, I believe that vegetarian diet is quite conductive in satisfying all the needs of body and bless the human beings with long and happy lives.
In conclusion, although non vegetarian give high amount of proteins and put a rein on the numbers of animals, vegetarian diets
also serve colossal amounts of minerals. Hence, I think that the vegetarian foods are more beneficial and ensure the overall prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16891891892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8081051817 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6565406186 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885256508734 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371944711933 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643410381298 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481228714984 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365336080025 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.