the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries
the given graph compares twelve nations in term of the whole Olypic medals that they won at Olympic games.
Overall, It is clear that the USA won the most Olympic prizers regardless of gold, sliver or bronze medals. In addition, there is a small difference in the total number of every type of medals in each country.
Standing at around 2300 medals, with 900 gold medals, 750 sliver and 650 bronze medals, the total medals of the USA are twice more than that of Soviet Union, with just 1000 medals. Apart from the USA and Soviet Union, the UK, France, Germany and Italy also won over 500 medals.
Japan is the country that won the least number of medals, at just approximately 400 medals. The number of each type of medals in this country is lower than any particular country. However, this one with Hungary are the only two country that have the most similar number of detached kind of medals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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the given graph compares twelve nations in ...
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...medals that they won at Olympic games. Overall, It is clear that the USA won th...
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...ympic prizers regardless of gold, sliver or bronze medals. In addition, there is ...
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... every type of medals in each country. Standing at around 2300 medals, with 900...
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... 2300 medals, with 900 gold medals, 750 sliver and 650 bronze medals, the total medal...
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...ls, with 900 gold medals, 750 sliver and 650 bronze medals, the total medals of t...
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...re twice more than that of Soviet Union, with just 1000 medals. Apart from the US...
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...ny and Italy also won over 500 medals. Japan is the country that won the least ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58385093168 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08201500152 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3107753338 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34105349433 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15325472712 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801430782594 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21533972185 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871881577857 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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