the global sales in billions of dollars of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
the given chart gives information about the worldwide profits in billions of dollars of four detached sort of video games from 2000 to 2006.
From the statistics in the graph, It can be concluded that three out of four global turnover of digital games increased gradually over the period of six years. Global sales of Handheld played a important role in the total profits of video games.
In 2000, there was no sales came from Mobile games and Online games, while the global sales of console games stood at around $6 billion, $5 billion lower than handheld games.
Over the next three years, more and more people played mobile, online and handheld games, with a growth to $15 billion of worldwide sales of handheld games and an increase by about $3 billion of both mobile and online games. By contrast, this figures for console games dropped to under $5 billion at the same time.
In the final years of period, the old trends did not vary. the global profits of Mobile, Online and handheld games grew to around 17, 9 and 7 billion dollars respectively in 2003, whereas console games become the least commonly played, with the global sales of this one fell to just under $3 billion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7684729064 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17576788313 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532019704433 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0732142596 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344216544584 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149864622684 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896100968061 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208154115708 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498067790717 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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