Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds,providing us new avenues and update us with latest technologies and current affairs.However, E-education has been hailed as one of the fascinating scientific invention in the history of mankind.Some people uphold it as a positive trend whilst other have reservations about it.In my opinion,Online education poses more advantages than disadvantages.
To embark on,online classes may help students to save the travel time and cost who usually comes from far to attend the classes.To exemplify,students from rural areas can easily attend the lessons and get better opportunities to enhance their skills.Moreover,teacher also can connect with millions of students at a same time,and can share the videos of the tutorial instead of giving the lecturer again and again.Furthermore,this trend would be helpful for universities and colleges as they do not need to expend the space for the classes and can save the money of infrastructure.
Having said that, there is also an another side,traditional classes have some benefits which are highly beneficial.Face to face interaction always help to build the confidence and motivate the students to tackle the issues.In addition,pupil can interact with several students who all have different skills and abilities. Thus,student can explore various skills.
To recapitulate, confessedly, traditional classes may provide some chance of versatile development but in sharp contrast,Online classes would be convenient and relaxing approach for the students and teachers both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77254032338 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.241615616 49.4020404114 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.8 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126529189447 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611909549224 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055598975539 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753530560319 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522723537818 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.87 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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