you have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your lette
Dear ...,
Hello! I am at pink of my health and hope you're sailing at the same boat. I am penning down this letter to inform you that I have recently moved to my new house. Gladly, this house is quite massive in size and it is equipped with all the essential modern amenities such as a modern kitchen, a swimming pool, a gym and a terrace garden.
Though this house is situated in the one of the cosmopolitan societies, the dwellers of this colony is highly educated and sincere people. On the left side of my house , there is a renowned cardiologist named Ms H L Lilly resides and undoubtedly, her behavior is very generous, amicable and polite.
Don't make any lame excuse and come to my place in the following week. Frankly speaking, I am eagerly waiting for you as I am quite excited to show you my house. Please don't worry about accommodation, you can live here for two or three days and your presence would definitely endow me the opportunity to be a host and apprise you with my spellbind culinary skills.
Hope you would visit soon. Take care and stay healthy.
Best wishes
NAvdeep Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: you're
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Suggestion: massive
... new house. Gladly, this house is quite massive in size and it is equipped with all the essent...
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Suggestion:
...dly, this house is quite massive in size and it is equipped with all the essentia...
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Suggestion:
...l the essential modern amenities such as a modern kitchen, a swimming pool, a gym...
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...a modern kitchen, a swimming pool, a gym and a terrace garden. Though this...
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...ming pool, a gym and a terrace garden. Though this house is situated in the one...
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...is colony is highly educated and sincere people. On the left side of my house , t...
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...re people. On the left side of my house , there is a renowned cardiologist named ...
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...ly resides and undoubtedly, her behavior is very generous, amicable and polite. ...
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Suggestion: Don't
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Suggestion: don't
...te excited to show you my house. Please dont worry about accommodation, you can live...
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Suggestion:
...y about accommodation, you can live here for two or three days and your presence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58793969849 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52258921549 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673366834171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8859798159 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206832633417 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658576767419 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489603540048 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108857947651 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441405466099 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.