You have recently moved into a new house You want to tell your friend about your good news Write to your friend In the letter Describe the house Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house

Essay topics:

You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Rohan,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. You’ll be glad to know that I recently bought a new apartment in the Red Shift Society, and I’m shifted from a rented house.

The society is ten minutes away from the central town. My apartment is on the twentieth floor with a spectacular view of the city, and it consists of four bedrooms, a big living room, a big balcony, and a fully furnished German kitchen.
Moreover, the best part of my society is that it has all the amenities like a gym, sports club, swimming pool, and a reserved parking area. Besides, the environment around my society is serene and it’s best to enjoy suburban life. Also, I have met a couple of neighbors which are very helpful and friendly.
Next Saturday, I am inviting my loved ones which include you to my apartment as I am organizing a house warming party. I’ll be joyful by having your presence on the coming Saturday at my place and it will be a great chance for you to see my apartment.

I’m hoping to see you soon.

Warm regards,
Shwatank

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54081632653 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47229547141 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9631471484 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9090909091 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138896357786 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465308436773 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514135522657 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077162633854 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062766171226 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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