Dear Rohan,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. It seems ages and we haven't met for a while. Anyway, I would like to give you the news that I'll be in your City next month.
As you know, I have been working with a multinational software company for the past five years. Due to the excellent job performance, my manager decided to send me to represent our firm in tech Seminar next month in your city Vancouver. The meeting will be only for two weeks and during that time I would like to stay with you in your apartment. The meeting will be held in the mornings for about three hours a day. And then for rest of the day, I am free to go anywhere.
During that spare time, we both can move around in your city and can enjoy our old friendship days together. Besides, I know fourteen calendar days are pretty much long. It will be a financial burden on you to feed me and to give me shelter. But, I would like to offer to pay for myself for the days that I insist to stay at your place.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rohan, I hope you will find this letter in the ...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...lth and happiness. It seems ages and we havent met for a while. Anyway, I would like t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, look, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19718309859 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19701255307 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7702083655 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8571428571 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318295020064 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986304019835 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677183240198 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19183454723 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629134408389 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.